User:JessDeckk/Sleep deprivation/Aclark00 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

JessDeckk


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:JessDeckk/Sleep deprivation


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Sleep deprivation

Evaluate the drafted changes
There is not much that has been added or revised. If you compare sleep apnea with insomnia stating they are similar, you should probably add what makes them different. This can cause confusion as to the differences in the two if you only state they are similar. I am also unsure of your revision/addition to the chronic-sleep restricted... paragraph. I would keep working on making additions and adding resources. The management section looks like a good place you could potentially make some additions.