User:JessDeckk/Sleep deprivation/Jcarte52 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

JessDeck


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:JessDeckk/Sleep deprivation


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Sleep deprivation

Evaluate the drafted changes
So, I think this needs a lot of work. This article already has a lot of things added to it. One thing I would look into is how decreased sleep can actually decrease someones life span and lead to certain diseases.