User:JessaMurray/Ladies in Love/Karsonpotts Peer Review

Peer Review

 * When you read the plot description, can you follow the story of the movie? Note any parts that were confusing to you.
 * "Yoli’s man whom she claims to not love falls in love with a very young woman"... had to read a few times to comprehend
 * "The women call the doctor Martha was feeding bunnies for/kind of dating" ... could be worded differently, reads as if Martha is the doctor Are there internal wiki links to all relevant actors, production personnel, historical entities or   events?
 * Yes for the plot summary (Maybe link 'ritual'?) but not for the reception
 * -Ladislaus Bus-Fekete play
 * -Twentieth Century Are there citations for any facts that do NOT come from watching the movie itself?
 * Yes. The NY Times and the Chicago Daily Tribune Do you see any grammatical issues that the writer should correct?
 * "Two men visit the women’s new place. Yoli’s love interest, John Barta (Paul Lukas), and Susie’s love interest, Tyrone Power Jr. (Tyrone Power)." I think this needs to be one sentence Any other comments on the entry?
 * This film seems super interesting. You did a good job boiling down what seems to be a very random and unusual plot. It seems there is an extra space between the 'reception' and 'cast' section

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