User:Jessbl/Portrait of Doge Leonardo Loredan/Icecreamsandwichlove Peer Review

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(provide username) -- Jessel
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 * User:Jessbl/Portrait of Doge Leonardo Loredan
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Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I love how you describe the details of the piece, including the design and colors. I enjoyed learning more about the piece and think you have good sources.

I think you should separate the second paragraph of the article body into a new section, and have a separate section for style and interpretation.

This is a link to a Monet painting wikipedia page Impression, Sunrise that you can use as an example for organization.

Also, is there any more information you can add to the history of the painting? Or some more background on the Doge himself or more about the artist.