User:Jesse Williams1/Cotinis nitida/TaliaSanders06 Peer Review

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Jesse Williams1
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:Cotinis nitida
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Cotinis nitida

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead does introduce the topic well and provides great introductory information on the species. The only changes I would make to the lead is making it more concise. Some of the information could be combined to help with the structure. I also think that it is good there there is an abundance of information present in the article, but some of it wasn’t as clear to understand. For example, in the characteristics and description section, the june beetle and the green june beetle are referred to as two different things, when in the introduction they are listed as interchangeable terms. Overall, I do think the tone of the article is neutral and there are plenty of pictures for a visual reference which is good. The last change I would make is to some of the section titles. For example, the interactions section could say, "interactions with vertebrates” to help tie in what that portion is really about. All in all, good job.