User:Jessica1419/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E6%8A%96%E9%9F%B3

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I'm trying to do short videos on the douyin platform lately, so I'm interested in this platform.

Evaluate the article

 * The lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic, also include a brief description of the article's major sections.
 * But the lead include too much information about TikTok, which is just the sister version of douyin.
 * Great job on the content. Introduced douyin as a platform from all aspects.
 * But again, too much information about TikTok. Though they are related, they are not the same platform. TikTok info should be included under TikTok entries, not douyin entries.
 * Too little has been written about douyin's arguments and criticisms. And compliments about douyin don't make it into the articles. Too little has been written about douyin's arguments and criticisms. And compliments about douyin don't make it into the articles.
 * Most of the sources and references come from douyin's official website, some official news media, and some statistics websites. So most of the information comes from reliable sources. And the information is also updated to the recent.
 * Perhaps because douyin itself is an online platform, this article intersperses formal and online terms in its introduction. So much so that some parts seem a bit cut off.
 * On the Talk page, a lot of people sent the same comment as me: suggesting to split into douyin and tiktok. because these two platforms are now completely different. But other than that, there wasn't much discussion.
 * Overall, the entire article is clearly presented and can be very intuitive for the uninitiated. However, there is just too much description about another platform, TikTok, even more than the space occupied by douyin. This is very unreasonable.