User:Jessica Eng/Social media and identity/Rwoo1 Peer Review

General info
Jessica Eng
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Jessica Eng/Social media and identity - Wikipedia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Social media and identity - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
I completely agree that keying in on only one social media example is not relevant and does not add any extra information to the article. If not adding more examples I would add a sentence like: social media is becoming a key form of people's everyday life, being able to understand how to use and read it will give people access to another form of information.