User:JessicabowmanOU/Margaret Charles Smith/Krisbrown21 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

jessicabowmanOU


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:JessicabowmanOU/Margaret Charles Smith
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Margaret Charles Smith

Lead
The lead is already thorough and doesn't require information to be added.

Content
I think you had a great idea to add more about her personal life. To me, her midwife career was already covered extensively, so that's a good place to expand.

Tone and Balance
Your content appears to be neutral.

Sources and References
I didn't see any sources except for the original Wikipedia article. Are you going to reference sources that were already used in the article?

Organization
The article was already established and organized in a way that didn't need to be changed.

Images and Media
I didn't see any images. It might be cool to look for some. Personally, I always like to know what someone looks like when I view a Wikipedia article.

I really liked your ideas and I think you're on the right track!