User:Jessicanjuarez/Divine Love Conquering Earthly Love (Baglione)/Nmhmechdesign Peer Review

Improve as Good Start to your Article
Overall Jessica on the painting you choice to edit and research.

Was well organized formal structure of explaining me about painting description detail of whole painting itself.

As well explain deep meaning of Symbolism of angle, human figure and demon.

You have good start with body paragraph keep on same topic without off subject that is not related to the painting.

two advice I have to mention to improve your Article of Divine Love Conquering Earthly Love (Baglione).

Advice to Improve your Article
First of all I notice the new information that you added to the article has no new number sources. Where you got information from different source with no link to the website that mention about this specific painting. You must add them to show create to website you went and mention about author name. If the website does mention about the author name.

One more advice you need to mention and explain why the artist of Caravaggio did this painting in first place?

What was Caravaggio motive to do the painting?

What were the scholar talking about Caravaggio painting of this one your doing research on?

Was Caravaggio doing this painting to leave as message who worshiped the devil of being punishment from angle wrath to end your life?