User:Jessie886/Language Policy in Taiwan's White Terror/Elliek22 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jessie886


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I really enjoyed reading your article and you did such a great job. You are extremely thorough and have some great statistics. You already said you were going to add more to the cultural and political influence, and I definitely think you can do a lot with that and expand on it. Your article stay informative and neutral the whole time, and does a fantastic job of informing an unknowledgeable reader. Maybe you could add more to the erosion of language policy section and talk about the build up to anti-Mainlander ethnic nationalism. I really liked everything you did, the evidence you provided, and you good take this in a lot of different directions. I can't wait to read the final draft!