User:Jesslmc23/User:AH1103 SAR/Janna Ireland/Jesslmc23 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

I am reviewing AH1103 SAR's article describing contemporary artist Jenna Ireland.


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:AH1103 SAR/Janna Ireland


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
While the article itself is a rough draft, which means that it's still under development, it still holds important information about the artist Janna Ireland and all the accomplishments she has done in her career. The information about her personal life is still very miniscule because of less information about her life but a lot about her art and the exhibitions and achievements she has earned. The topic is about the artist and holds little to no information about her history behind art or her journey through her discovery in art. What's important is that it should be understanding about the artist so that viewers can learn from her past and see how she got to her artistic talents and accomplishments. The impressive features are the tables and templates used to organize the exhibits both in a group and alone that will give factual information about her achievements in art. The only problem is that the dates are from new to old, which could cause confusion for the viewers if they preferred old to new. References are used and publications are well organized but it still needs more information about the artist herself. There's also a subject titled "Artworks" that hasn't yet been filled with information. Again, this is a rough draft and hasn't been finished yet so the changes must still be in development currently but these points are advice for future notice.