User:Jessranthony/Cheela Smith/Bluebanisters11 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jessie


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jessranthony/Cheela_Smith?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I really love this so far. It is balanced and there is crucial information. I would extend more on the personal life section if possible. However, I believe it is very good as of now. The only thing I would say is work on including in-text citations. Great job!