User:Jessranthony/Cheela Smith/Britneymegnath Peer Review

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Jessranthony


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 * User:Jessranthony/Cheela Smith


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Evaluate the drafted changes
The article is missing a lead. In your lead, it might be good to introduce Cheela simply by saying where she is from and when she was born. Then, the lead might include a small description that summarizes Cheela's significance and life. For example, I put in mine that Dunlap was a graphic designer, illustrator, and artist and also listed her most noteworthy contribution. Basically, the lead is just a good way to give an idea of who the person is without getting too in depth.

The content added is relevant. I especially like how the page is separated into career and contributions. I do not know how much information you could gather, but a good tip might be to divide the career section into time periods. You could show how she started her career, what the peak of it was, and what she does nowadays. Again, I don't know how much information you have so that might not be possible but it is just a suggestion.

You have a good list of sources and all of them seem both reliable and relevant. The article meets Wikipedia's notability requirements of 2-3 reliable secondary sources. I noticed you have a lot of secondary sources that help to contextualize Cheela's career which is good. It is also easy to identify those primary sources that were written directly by Cheela. From what I can see, it seems the sources are both thorough and diverse.

I like how you hyperlinked everything that you could. This increases Cheela's representation on Wikipedia and is something I forgot to do to mine. It gives the reader easier access to Cheela's works if they are interested.

Overall, the tone of the article is unbiased and focused on contributing information. No viewpoints seem overrepresented or underrepresented. The content that is used seems up-to-date and reliable, as I mentioned earlier.

One suggestion would be to add pictures if possible, and that little side box that lists information. This is something I plan to add to mine too.