User:Jesstrada/Association for the Promotion of the Status of Women/Aosanch Peer Review

User:Jesstrada/Association for the Promotion of the Status of Women/Aosanch Peer Review

General info
Jesstarda
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):https://w.wiki/9TPw

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)