User:Jessyca Zanetti/Jeferson Tenório/Swellin Peer Review

I just finished reading the translation you guys are doing on the Jeferson Tenório page and I think it looks great. I think that adding the activism section and his Awards/ award nominations were both great additions.The content is relative and up to date and there doesn't seem to be missing content. The tone of the page is very neutral and informative. Y'all have TONS of sources which is great. I like the photo you guys added and it made me curious to know more about the street of authors. It would be cool to know what his involvement in that means, if it is part of a protest, or like a Hollywood walk of fame thing? maybe it doesn't mean anything idk. The only thing that I would change (and I'm being super nitpicky) would be in the area of the Awards and nominations, maybe add what the names of these awards would be in English and, if the books were ever published in English, what the book names would be in English. You guys are doing great.

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