User:Jevega2001/Beaten coffee/Esteban15vp Peer Review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? Jevega2001
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: User:Jevega2001/Beaten coffee

Lead
Guiding questions:


 * Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic? It has an introductory sentence but could be a bit more descriptive
 * Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections? No
 * Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article? No, all the information in the lead is presented on the article
 * Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed? Is a concise lead

Lead evaluation
The lead can be improved by adding a bit of information about the rest of the content

Content
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added relevant to the topic? The content is relevant
 * Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong? The content can had more information about the topic

Content evaluation
The article can be improved by adding a information about the central topic

Tone and Balance
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added neutral? Is neutral
 * Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position? No, it's write in a neutral way
 * Does the content added attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another? No, the article just offer information

Tone and balance evaluation
The article only offers information and is written in a neutral tone

Sources and References
Guiding questions:


 * Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information? Yes
 * Are the sources current? Yes
 * Check a few links. Do they work? All links work

Organization
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read? It's easy to read
 * Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors? Has a few grammatical and spelling errors like unnecessary commas and misspelled words
 * Is the content added well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic? Yes

Overall impressions
Guiding questions:


 * What are the strengths of the content added? Has an organized structure.
 * How can the content added be improved? Adding information and correcting grammar and spelling errors