User:Jewellha/Aristostomias/Jamesmarg Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jewellha (Hanna Jewell)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jewellha/Aristostomias?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Aristostomias
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Aristostomias

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think your contributions to the Aristostomias article look great so far! I looked over the information you added regarding the production and detection of red light, along with potential advantages to this adaptation, and it seems like you added some important facts and expanded the article in a productive manner. Your content along with tone and balance seem solid, and the organization is great. I noticed in you mentioned adding citations gave you some trouble, but it seems that you've added some good references so far. I'd suggest maybe add a bit more information (if it's available, I know deep-sea organisms info can be hard to come by), but overall you did a great job!