User:Jewellha/Malacosteus niger/Jamesmarg Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jewellha (Hanna Jewell)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jewellha/Malacosteus_niger?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Malacosteus_niger (Links to an external site.)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think your contributions to the M. Niger article look great so far! After reading your peer review notes and the article, I think you did a good job adding important information considering the article was already quite thorough. I looked over the information you added regarding red light bioluminescence, and it seems like you added some important facts and expanded the article in a productive manner. Your content along with tone and balance seem solid, and the organization is great. You've added some good references, and overall did a great job! I don't spot any grammar mistakes.