User:Jewellha/Pachystomias/Jamesmarg Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?
 * Jewellha (Hanna Jewell)
 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jewellha/Pachystomias?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 *  https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Pachystomias 
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 *  https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Pachystomias 

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think your contributions to the Pachystomias article look great so far! I looked over the information you added regarding the production of far-red bioluminescence, visual systems, and adaptive significance, and it seems like you added some important facts and expanded the article in a productive manner. Your content along with tone and balance seem solid, and the organization is great. You did a great job in relating Pachystomias to your other article, Aristostomias, as well. I noticed in you mentioned adding citations gave you some trouble, but it seems that you've added some good references so far. I'd suggest maybe add a bit more information (if it's available, I know deep-sea organisms info can be hard to come by), but overall you did a great job!