User:Jewoo An

About me
Hello, My name is Jewoo An. Native's call me Jay. I'm 23 years old, and my habits are playing guitar and Piano. When I lived in Korea, I graduated from the Korea Marine Corps. Before, graduated Marine Corps, I wanted to be a bartender. The reason is that when I went to the bar, the bartender and the people talking comfortably were so impressive. However, the Korean economy is not doing well right now, so I decided to consult with my father to find a technical position. And as a result, I found a job called Aviation, and I chose this major. In the future, my parents wanted me to do this job because they thought was a stable job. Therefore, if I have income, I will make my own bar. Lastly, my defining experiences is that we can’t do anything as we give up something, so it is important for my life or my personality.

Wikipedia of interest to me
As I said before, I interested in the conversation between people, so my Wikipedia interests are Bio psycho-social mode https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Biopsychosocial_model. Going back to my past, I was a student who didn't finish school well. I could really say I was a bad kid. I have grown up with a lot of hurt from my parents. It took a really long time to overcome it and become stronger by choosing the Korean Marine Corps. I remember reading a lot of psychology books when I was in the Korean Marine Corps. Because I was hurt by my parents a lot, I wanted to continue a better relationship with people without returning the wounds to them. However, when I understood about 70 percent, I think this Wikipedia information was so impressive and was to explain how much respect people have and continue their relationships.

Article Evaluation
Geographically, Korea has a history of constant conflict between China and Japan. One of them is the territorial dispute with Japan, which has been around for a long time. The island's name is called "Liancourt Rocks" This island has been labeled as "Dokdo" in Korean or "Takeshima" in Japanese on the map of other countries, and the controversy surrounding it has continued. Therefore, I visited the "Liancourt Rocks" article on Wikipedia, and found three aspects of it worth commenting on: its each fact is not appropriate, reliable source, some link is dead, and it's irrelevant sections or sentences.

Appropriate, reliable source
This article covers the geographic location of "Liancourt Rocks" and the climate and ecosystem. In addition, although the territorial labeling with neighboring countries differs from that of Japan, it is still in conflict, but the content is not biased, and it is worth referring to the BBC NEWS and other research.

Some link is dead
You can find that external links and references are very useful, but some are not linked. The link that is not connected is as follows: “A study of Distance between Ulleungdo and Dokdo and Ocean Currents.” It is thought that unrelated data among reference materials is linked

Irrelevant sections or sentences
This site is related to 'Liancourt Rocks', a territorial dispute. Therefore, important grounds and interpretations related to territorial disputes are needed. However, some links contain light information that does not match the content on this site.

Summary
This page provides basic information about the island called “Liancourt Rocks”. And I think it shows relatively well the content of territorial disputes between Korea and Japan, but there is a lack of explanation on why the island called “Dokdo” is so important and the constant conflict continues. Also, it would be better if there were examples of how this island was specifically marked on other countries' maps.