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Practice Editing Here (Nov 15th in-class Wiki session work)

 * This is a place to practice clicking the "edit" button and practice adding references (via the citation button).

Task:


 * 1) Find a peer-reviewed journal article on PubMed. Practice inserting your citation in the above space using the "cite" tool
 * 2) Choose one "B-level" medical article on Wikipedia from the following list: https://wp1.openzim.org/#/project/Medicine/articles?quality=B-Class&importance=High-Class
 * 3) Practice editing live on Wikipedia by finding a typo in the text or improving the clarity/readability of a sentence by adjusting a few words in a sentence.

Assignment # 3- please post an anonymous copy here!
Hello, we are a group of medical students editing this page as part of our class assignment. We have compiled a list of suggestions to improve this article and would appreciate community feedback before we proceed with these edits.

We noticed reference reference #111 is a primary and outdated resource based on a single U.S. study that was published back in 1996. We propose updating the below paragraph data from a systematic review and meta-analysis that aggregates data from 141 studies across the globe as suggested below. We noticed the below statistic on the survival rate among those who experience in-hospital cardiac arrest does not indicate the time at which the survival rate was measured in the population. We propose replacing this statistic with data from Schluep et al., 2018 which includes the 1-year survival rate and identifies differences in survival rate between patients with cardiac versus non-cardiac hospital admission diagnoses. Reporting an updated survival rate at a patient-important time point and describing population differences would add value to this Wikipedia article. We also suggest adding the below information to the below paragraph because, aside from death, neurological outcomes are the most important outcome considered by physicians running a code or responding to a cardiac arrest. Thank you and look forward to receiving any feedback.

What to post on the Wikipedia article talk page (part of assignment 3)

 * This will also be covered on Nov 15th in class. Your group should use the below template to share an outline of your proposed improvements (including your new wording and citations). Article talk pages are not places to share your assignment answers. The Wikipedia community will be more interested in viewing your exact article improvement suggestions including where you plan to improve the article (which section), what wording you suggest, and the exact citation (Note: all citations must meet WP:MEDRS)
 * You will not be able to paste citations directly from your sandbox to talk pages (unless you are interested in editing/learning Wiki-code in the "source editing" mode). We suggest re-adding your citations on the talk page manually (using the cite button and populating the citation by pasting in the DOI, website, or PMID). You will have to repeat this process yet again when you edit the actual article live.
 * Talk Page Template: CARL Medical Editing Initiative/Fall 2021/Talk Page Template