User:Jg98915/Mycobacterium leprae/Eecc27 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Bab35555, Jg98915, Mew77356, Sydneybokor


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jg98915/Mycobacterium_leprae?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Mycobacterium leprae

Evaluate the drafted changes
I love how when adding your sources, you added what you wanted to contribute to the article with the source. This is a great way for you other editors to also be able to build on what you wanted to use from that source with maybe more information from that source or a different source. I would recommend having usable links for all of your sources, so people can easily see where your information came from, but other than that your citations look good. I see some of the changes that were done with the article for minor things like grammar and sentence structure, which is good, but there are still a few spots I would read over for clarity within the article. I like were the citations show you plan to add since it's needed, but would also look at fixing the lead to include more information and overview about the bacteria instead of just the disease it causes.