User:Jg98915/Mycobacterium leprae/ICapt.NemoI Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Seaoli12oceans12


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Seaoli12oceans12/Brucella canis


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Brucella canis

Evaluate the drafted changes
The wikipedia article itself is very sparse, and I appreciate how much you have added to the treatment and transmission sections. For the treatment section it may be helpful to include a brief mechanism for the antibiotic based on the structure of brucellosis.

Good catch on the introduction. I would include a few more pictures of the bacteria and what the damage from it might look like. The morphology section is very descriptive but it would be nice to see a picture to compliment the description.

I would also talk about how the bacteria can/cannot be cultured in a laboratory setting. And provide some more epidemological statistics that can be explained by the charasteristirics of the bacteria. For example, if the incubation period is short, is that because of what resources it uses and how fast it may be metabolizing them?. Why does the bacterium affect dogs but not humans?