User:Jgarabit/Slag/Sethpedia Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jgarabit


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Jgarabit/Slag
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Slag

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead

The lead has not yet been updated to reflect new content. The lead does initially establish what slag is, but I think it can be made it bit more concise and descriptive. The lead does mention some of the subjects that are the article’s major sections but the layout can be made better and more descriptive to underline what the page will contain. The lead probably can do we with more detail and the parts already written should be made more concise.

Content

The content added does seem to be relevant information to the article. From the looks of the added references it does appear that the added information is up to date. Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong? There doesn’t seem to be missing or unrelated content. The article doesn’t deal with one of Wikipedia’s     equity gaps.

Tone and Balance

The content added is neutral. There do not appear to be biased claims that were added. The added content does not seem to be trying to persuade the reader

Sources and References

The new content is well supported with seemingly relevant secondary sources of information. The sources do seem to be current. The quality of sources chosen seems to be fairly high with them all being from academic and peer reviewed papers. The links being cited do work.

Organization

The added content is well-written being an improvement over parts of the original article. The added content does not seem to have any grammatical or spelling errors.

It would be helpful to include more pictures to better illustrate what the applications of the slag are.

Overall impressions

Guiding questions:

The added content does improve the quality of the article by further expounding upon the applications for slag. The content added contains some good new applications and explanations for what slag is used for. Additional content can be added to better illustrate the environmental impact of slag that is seen today as well as in the past from previous dumping and the impact that has had on those environments.