User:Jgiglio7/Cohasset, Massachusetts/Siobhanr8 Peer Review

General info
(Jgiglio7)
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jgiglio7/Cohasset%2C_Massachusetts?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Cohasset, Massachusetts

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead

The lead includes an introductory sentences that concisely describes the article's content, but there is no information detailing the sections to come in the article.

Content

For the most part, this content is up to date. There is a detailed history, and some sections of this article may need to be cut down and become more concise.

Tone and Balance

The content is neutral and does not persuade anyone of anything. However, it seems to promote some other schools in the neighboring towns, and the information about private schools nearby may not be necessary.

Sources and References

Not everything is backed up by a secondary source of information, such as rivalries with other schools, sports teams, and nearby schools.

Organization

The content is definitely accurate but some is unnecessary.

Images and Media

There is a good amount of photos but I would add a couple to the high school section, whether it be of sports teams, the school itself, etc.