User:Jhaga2

World of Warcraft

To make this page better, I would expand on the "Items and Equipment" section. I would talk a little bit about legendary weapons, and possibly the lore behind them.

Soccer

To this page I would add a section about possible team structures and all the different positions. I would also include what the positions individual goals are, and how they contribute to the team.

Bioshock

In the Plot Summary section I would have to add a "spoiler" alert. A large portion of Bioshocks fun is in the story line. If people were to read this and not be warned that very specific plot details are going to be mentioned, it could possibly ruin the game experience for them.

Bandon, Oregon

In the section talking about the "Cranberry Festival" I would change it so that it read "2008 will mark the 62nd year of the event." Also, there is a section about the Bandon Dunes Golf resort and it provides a link to the Wikipedia page about Bandon Dunes Golf resort. I would just add a little information about Bandon Dunes Golf Resort, just for a little information, just in case someone did'nt feel like going to the Bandon Dunes Golf Resort page.

The Dark Tower (series)

I would add a section mentioning how there is now a comic book based on the Dark Tower Series, and add an image that deals with the comic book. Probably this one