User:Jhope54/Ray Johnson/Gorepixie Peer Review

I would like to see an explanation of the work youv'e done and significance of changes you have made. However, you have added relevant and up to date articles on the topic and provided quite a bit of information for this topic. You collected sources that accurately provide context for each point you make in your drafted change to the article.

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