User:Jhulty/Film criticism/Mikeefarrar Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jhulty


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Jhulty/Film criticism


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Film criticism

Evaluate the drafted changes
I really like where Jonah has been making changes and making a meaningful sandbox contribution. He has done a ton of small fixes like grammar and punctuation. You can find his user name a lot in the most recent view history. He has added meaningful quotations that relate and help the article. I think it important that he focused hard on the quotes and the meaningful edits because the page has a lot to grow. In his sandbox he adds an academic perspective to film criticism. He provides a solid base to breakdown film criticism that he can most defiantly bulk up his article off of. His material is very easy to follow and it looks like he can move it right into the article very easily. He also has his citations and sources correctly put in the article, which makes it great for the reader. The only thing I think he should do is look for more citations and provide more info on his targeted areas.