User:JiachengGeng/Newton (unit)/CKphys Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

JiachengGeng and Johann Estrada


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:JiachengGeng/Newton (unit)


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Newton (unit)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Peer review responses / comments:
 * The paragraph written in the sandbox is informative and clear
 * There are some minor grammatical / punctuation errors (e.g. the use of "it's" instead of "its")
 * The plan to explain / define a newton may not be necessary, as it appears this has already been done within the current article.
 * The section on the history of the newton, in which “the Conférence Générale des Poids et Mesures“ is discussed, may be better suited in its own section. It seems a little strange for so much background information to be contained under the “definition” category.
 * It may be helpful to create a "history" or "significance" section for this information.
 * The article tone seems neutral, and sources all seem reliable.
 * The "examples" section seems slightly short; It might be helpful to include more detailed scenarios to help illustrate real-world significance.
 * For example, the current article only seems to discuss examples on Earth. It may be helpful, then, to include examples with a different gravitaional acceleration (e.g on the moon). This would be both interesting and informative about wieght differences in different enviroments.