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Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1 - Artificial Intelligence Industry in China

 * Article Evaluation
 * Article Evaluation


 * The lead section
 * The lead section is very concise and did a good job explaining the existing contents that the page already has.
 * Content
 * Most of information at the page is referring to the Chinese government documents and official statements, which means secondary statements are lacking
 * Lots of information is out of date and lacks of detail information about AI industries in China. For instance, the collaboration between the private and public sectors and the international partnership focusing on developing China's AI industry could be added in this section
 * Late of information about sector specific AI development in China
 * Tone and Balance
 * Relatively neutral but single sided.
 * Lots of information are paraphrased through China's official statements
 * Organization and Writing Quality
 * Writing is good, clear, and concise.
 * Some content could be rearranged to build a more clear logic line. As of now, the timeline is mixed up and could be difficult for audiences without relevant background knowledge to follow
 * Sourcing
 * Most references are from China's government statements, and most are published years ago.
 * Given China has set 2020 as the benchmark for some AI development, latest updates are needed
 * Image and Media
 * there is no pictures needed
 * Overall Impressions
 * Good introduction with detailed statistical data
 * Good general information, but lacks of details
 * Talk Section
 * the talk section has similar concerns of lacking secondary documents and reference to the page
 * Sources
 * https://academic.oup.com/cjip/article/14/3/417/6352222?login=true
 * https://academic.oup.com/cjip/article/14/3/417/6352222?login=true

Option 2 - Military Court of China 中国军事法庭
Article Evaluation

https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E4%B8%AD%E5%9B%BD%E4%BA%BA%E6%B0%91%E8%A7%A3%E6%94%BE%E5%86%9B%E5%86%9B%E4%BA%8B%E6%B3%95%E9%99%A2
 * There is only one sentence in the wiki English page.
 * There is a substantial amount of information need to be improved in this section. For instance, there is lack of informtion about the history and establishment of the Chinese military court. It also lacks of information about the previous leaders and the main judges.
 * The Chinese version has lots of information about the Chinese military court, including the history, the specifc duties that the court has, the government bodies that are in charge of managing and overseeing, as well as the previous leadership
 * Sources

Option 3 - China Bankruptcy Rules

 * Article title
 * China Bankruptcy Rules
 * Article Evaluation
 * The current page only has information about the section title for the exsiting Chinese bankrutcy law and regulation, but lacks of brief introduction about the detail clasues
 * The lead section did not give a clear introduction to the audience about the kinds of information that is included in the article.
 * The writing is very confusing since there is no useful information in the page
 * Some information in the page is inaccurate . For instance, the lead section mentioned that the personal bankruptcy law only exists in Hong Kong and Shenzhen, which is not true. China has personal bankruptcy laws since 1996, but there are lots of debates about it since lots of clasues are vauge and the court has different explanations and interpretations of the clause in practice. But it does not mean China did not have personal bankruptcy laws
 * Sources
 * http://www.xinhuanet.com/legal/2021-07/19/c_1127671976.htm
 * https://www.modernchinastudies.org/us/issues/past-issues/57-mcs-1997-issue-2/400-2011-12-29-17-45-11.html
 * http://www.xinhuanet.com/legal/2021-07/19/c_1127671976.htm
 * https://www.modernchinastudies.org/us/issues/past-issues/57-mcs-1997-issue-2/400-2011-12-29-17-45-11.html

Option 4 - Black Swan Theory

 * Article title
 * Black Swan Theory
 * Article Evaluation
 * Lead Section
 * Clear lead section, easy to understand
 * Concise and well explain the following sections that are included in the page
 * Content
 * Clear explain about the theory, since the theory is very simple to understand
 * Nice selection of examples
 * Include the origin of black swan theory, but more major historical events that have been commonly seen as black swan events could be included in this page
 * Tone and Balance
 * Neutral
 * Organization
 * Clear and concise
 * Source
 * Very relevant to the concept
 * Very relevant to the concept


 * Sources
 * https://weblogibc-co.com/wp-content/uploads/2019/02/The-Black-Swan-Nassim-Nicholas-Taleb-1.pdf

Option 5

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