User:Jiawenfang/Wolf Warrior 2/BoYangGengJackson Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) Jiawenfang， 朱羿齐 ， Isabelwei77


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Jiawenfang/Wolf Warrior 2
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Wolf Warrior 2

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

On this draft article, first of all, the structure of the whole article is complete, including the story background, main content, cast list, creation process of the story, surrounding news related to the film, music, box office, marketing strategy, awards won and citation. The lead of this draft article is clear and concise, and the content also explains the theme of the story clearly, as well as the latest views and contents. The content of the article is also very logical. But I think there is room for improvement in the layout, such as adding more pictures and videos. I think the sources of the cited articles should be selected from the database of more authoritative websites and academic journals. But on the whole, I still think this article is good, which can give me a general understanding of the information related to Wolf Warrior 2.