User:Jiawenfang/Wolf Warrior 2/HaotongLi Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

JiawenFang 朱羿齐 Isabelwei77


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Jiawenfang/Wolf Warrior 2
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Wolf Warrior 2

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi,This is my peer review for you.

Lead

The lead include an introductory sentence and it is concisely and clearly describes the article's topic. The Lead is short but very clear about the information that needs to be presented. This includes important information about the director, box office and synopsis.

Content

The additions are thematic, and the summary includes a lot of detail. The additions are also relatively new. Since this film is relatively new, most of the content I saw was also in 2017-2018. The content is closely related to the topic, and I don't see anything irrelevant.

Tone and Balance

The content added is neutral and does not skew heavily toward the claims of a particular job. There is no such thing as over-representation or under-representation. Clear ideas and clear content. There is no attempt to persuade readers to support one position or move away from another.

Sources and References

New content is backed by a solid source, and the content added is thematic. In addition, the search for reference has relatively authoritative content, as well as very detailed content. The added content is also a relatively recent resource content.

Organization

The added content is carefully written and draws the reader down. The overall content of the article is clean and clear. Paragraphs are also organized. And the use of tables to do content sorting (awards).

Images and Media

On the whole, Images and Media are not added. Maybe you can continue to add images and so on to improve the article. But the use of tables is very reasonable.

Overall impressions

Overall impression, I think this is a very complete article. The quality and level is also very good, the content is very detailed, not only introduces the plot of the movie. It also introduced the content of production. Summaries of the music and awards categories are also detailed and tabulated. I think the improvement can be made in reference, which is mostly in Chinese. Maybe you can find some English resources as a supplement.

-HaotongLi