User:Jiawenfang/Wolf Warrior 2/Pudding34 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

I am reviewing Jiawen Fang's work.


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/ User:Jiawenfang/Wolf_Warrior_2?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jiawenfang/Wolf_Warrior_2?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jiawenfang/Wolf_Warrior_2?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template

Evaluate the drafted changes
The good part is that the content is very neatly distributed and every detail is well to understand. And in the cast also used the format, which did much better than I did. I prefer the part of plot synopsis, this part of the description is very detailed, it is easy to make the audience want to understand the film to be. I suggest that the author can add some more content because the film itself is a very high box office, so there are many resources to query, this will make Wikipedia more informative.