User:JiaxunZhao/User:ChristianKoreanAmerican/Linguistic Injustice in Politics/Cmalves24 Peer Review

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(ChristianKoreanAmerican)


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 * User:ChristianKoreanAmerican/Linguistic Injustice in Politics


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I think your information is good and well researched. However i do think that you might want to add more information especially on the subjects of the court and imperialism. I think since those topics are more directly connected to your topic of politics it would help out alot. I also think that instead of using so many direct quotes from your sources, you should re state what they have said in your own words.