User:JiaxunZhao/User:ChristianKoreanAmerican/Linguistic Injustice in Politics/Darr320 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

J2R


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:ChristianKoreanAmerican/Linguistic_Injustice_in_Politics
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:ChristianKoreanAmerican/Linguistic_Injustice_in_Politics

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The lead is very short but concise. It defines what politics is and that it causes linguistic injustice. The lead does not briefly describe the sections of the article. The content is good. The first section is a bit short but still detailed with modern examples. So far the tone is neutral besides some point of views of experts are used.