User:JiaxunZhao/User:ChristianKoreanAmerican/Linguistic Injustice in Politics/Difan Ye Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) J2R


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:ChristianKoreanAmerican/Linguistic_Injustice_in_Politics


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:ChristianKoreanAmerican/Linguistic_Injustice_in_Politics

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Currently, the majority of the article has not been completed; therefore, the content should be completed sooner. Additionally, the overview is brief and only defines politics and political factors. However, there are links to the Wikipedia explanation, which is a plus. Due to the incompleteness of the article, it is difficult to provide a detailed analysis of the topic. However, it is evident that the authors are on the right track: the citation is done correctly according to the guide, and in the paragraph "Linguistic Injustice in Imperialism" there are also academic articles. However, the "Linguistic Injustice in Official Languages" paragraph lacks effective analysis and summary due to its incompleteness, and only a cursory description of the temporal context is provided. This inevitably results in the absence of a corresponding reference list. In general, J2R must hurry to complete the article, as the current content is not only devoid of depth but also incapable of being effectively analyzed.