User:JiayiHannahMa/Bing Xin/Littlemissgemini Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? JiayiHannahMa
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: User:JiayiHannahMa/Bing Xin

Lead
Guiding questions:


 * Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer? I don't think so.
 * Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic? Yes
 * Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections? Yes
 * Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article? Yes
 * Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed? It's concise

Content
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added relevant to the topic? Yes
 * Is the content added up-to-date? Yes
 * Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong? There are no unrelated contents.
 * Does the article deal with one of Wikipedia's equity gaps? Does it address topics related to historically underrepresented populations or topics? It's mostly just facts, so no.

Tone and Balance
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added neutral? Yes
 * Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position? no
 * Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented? no
 * Does the content added attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another? I don't think so

Sources and References
Guiding questions:


 * Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information? I think so
 * Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic? Yes
 * Are the sources current? yes
 * Are the sources written by a diverse spectrum of authors? Do they include historically marginalized individuals where possible? I'm not sure.
 * Check a few links. Do they work? Yes

Organization
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read? Yes
 * Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors? The flow of a few sentences aren't very smooth. One thing though, at the end of the "life" section, in the last paragraph where you talked about Bingxin's death, "His condition deteriorated and died on February 28, 1999...". Bingxin is female, so I'm guessing that "his" is probably a typing error?
 * Is the content added well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic? Yes

Images and Media
Guiding questions: If your peer added images or media


 * Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic?
 * Are images well-captioned?
 * Do all images adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations?
 * Are the images laid out in a visually appealing way?

For New Articles Only
If the draft you're reviewing is a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.


 * Does the article meet Wikipedia's Notability requirements - i.e. Is the article supported by 2-3 reliable secondary sources independent of the subject?
 * How exhaustive is the list of sources? Does it accurately represent all available literature on the subject?
 * Does the article follow the patterns of other similar articles - i.e. contain any necessary infoboxes, section headings, and any other features contained within similar articles?
 * Does the article link to other articles so it is more discoverable?

Overall impressions
Guiding questions:


 * Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete? Yes
 * What are the strengths of the content added? The section "style" was added. Bingxin is a writer. So it fits really well into the article.
 * How can the content added be improved? We are still working on it, so it's obviously not completed yet. But I think the general direction is going great. Just that maybe you could cite sources a bit more frequently (citing them at the end of sentences/ paragraphs instead of at the end of the section).