User:Jiayi Yan/Li Wenyi/Driedpetals Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? Jiayi Yan Link to draft you're reviewing  User:Jiayi Yan/Li Wenyi

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead

The lead includes an introductory sentence that describes the topic well. It also briefly brings up other topics that well be discussed more in depth in the other sections. It's concise and not overly detailed.

Content

All the content in the article seems to be relevant to the topic, as well as dealing with one of Wikipedia's equity gaps, as it covers an underrepresented topic. Each sections length reflects the importance of the information, and the sections are organized well as they are chronologically done.

Tone and Balance

The content appears to be neutral, and does not seem overly biased. It does not seem to try to sway the reader to any specific direction, which is good.

Sources and References

Looking at the sources, they all appear to be reliable. The sources are also current, and written by various authors. The links provided in the references also appear to work. The sources include journal entries as well, which are great for reliable sources of information.

Images and Media

There appear to be no images added to the article.

Overall Impressions

This article seems to be a great addition to Wikipedia, especially since it does cover a topic that is underrepresented. I was impressed at how thorough the article is, and how much information was found on a topic that Wikipedia previously did not have. Overall, it was great to read and learn about this individual and their achievements!