User:Jiayi Yan/Li Wenyi/Sarahnalbandian Peer Review

General info
Jiayi Yan
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Evaluate the drafted changes
The Wikipedia page about Li Wenyi is informative, but it could use a bit more neutrality. For instance, the intro mentions her "tireless dedication," which sounds a bit too biased. It would be better to switch that up with more straightforward and factual language to keep things informative and fair. However, overall, the amount of content is great and references are also good!