User:Jiggyscience/Leucoagaricus gongylophorus/Ureegedeg Peer Review

General info
Jiggyscience
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Jiggyscience/Leucoagaricus gongylophorus
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Leucoagaricus gongylophorus

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead: It looks like existing lead can be more concise by combining first and last sentences in one sentence. The new part written in the body paragraph is not reflected in the lead, so I think it will be more representative when that's included.

Overall: I would suggest drawing more contents from existing article into your sandbox if editing. If adding new article section, I would suggest starting from the lead.