User:Jigmelamo/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Medicaid coverage gap

Community health centers in the United States

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
Medicaid coverage gap

I chose this article because my PE organization community clinic treats low-income patients through Medicaid, however, not every low-income patients qualify for medicaid all over the nation as majority of the states in the South did not adopted the medicaid expansion whereas other states including California adopted it.

Community health centers in the United States

I chose this article as my sector because my PE org Brighter Beginnings is a community-based healthcare clinic.

Evaluate the article
Medicaid coverage gap

lead section- The lead section of this article is to the point and give readers clear overview in the first paragraph itself.

content- the content of the article is relevant, backed up with statistics, and up to date.

tone and balance- the article used neutral tone and gave unbiased information regarding the medicaid coverage gap backed up with statistics and did not use words to support one party over the other.

sources and references- the data and statistics are backed up by reliable secondary sources of information which were news articles and peer review articles. They do talk about the historically and economically marginalized people.

organization and writing quality- The article looks very organized and used concise statements which was very convenient to read. It was organized into paragraphs in which each of them shed light on different subtopics.

images and media- There were no images attached to the artcle.

talk page discussion- I do not see conversations or discussions on the talk page. This article is part of the WikiProject Health and Fitness and WikiProject UnitedStates.

overall impressions- it is concise and convenient to read, however, I wish the article to get its sources from peer review journal articles instead of using News websites to make the article more neutral. There were no images and the article can be made more descriptive by adding images of graphs and pie charts to show statistics.

Community health centers in the United States

lead section- The first sentence of the article is very clear and concise and give readers a clear definition of Community health centers in the U.S. The major sections of the articles are briefly and concisely described.

content- the articles gave a background history of the topic and all of the data and information are up-to-date and recent.

tone and balance- the article used neutral tone and gave unbiased information regarding the medicaid coverage gap backed up with statistics and did not use words to support one party over the other.

sources and references- the data and statistics are backed up by reliable peer review journal articles primarily and some were from sources of  news articles and websites. They do talk about the historically and economically marginalized people.

organization and writing quality- The article has sub topics and are laid out in a very sequential and organized manner. I do not see grammatical errors.

images and media- There is only one image attached to the article. Since the article is more on the lengthy side, it is better to have at-least 3 images of community-based health clinic.

talk page discussion- I do not see conversations or discussions on the talk page. This article is part of the WikiProject Health and Fitness and WikiProject UnitedStates.

overall impressions- it is concise and convenient to read, however, the article will be more descriptive with images attached on the article to show the readers activities that take place in such clinics.