User:Jilliannourse/Cross-cultural psychology/MRayCall Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jilliannourse


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jilliannourse/Cross-cultural_psychology?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jilliannourse/Cross-cultural_psychology?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The article is a good start in explaining the basic background of cross-cultural psychology as it was clear in the explanation of the subfield's purpose of psychological research. The tone was neutral and lacked bias in the statement of the facts in regards to explaining its benefits and its criticisms. The only concern to be had with the article so far is that there are no sources to back up any of these facts and therefore brings in the question of validity and credibility.