User:JilllianMorris/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Article title
 * Obsessive-compulsive disorder


 * Article Evaluation
 * Needs intro paragraph edits (updated stats, what other disorders have similar symptoms, etc), changes to the order of the article, as well as work on causes and maintenance of the disorder. Treatment options should be elaborated on. The signs and symptoms section needs work, and the associated conditions section needs to be updated (sources). Behavioral model for OCD maintenance should be included in causes. Too much focus on popular culture view of OCD.


 * Sources
 * review DSM and make sure information tagged with this source is correct (include diagnostic criteria in full).

Option 2

 * Article title
 * Obsessive-compulsive personality disorder


 * Article Evaluation
 * This article needs major review in ordering, sources, and general information. Most of the sources need to be updated, and it is noted that most of the sources are primary. Especially in the introduction, some of the sentences are contradictory (this has been found, but so has the opposite).


 * Sources
 * review DSM citations

Option 3

 * Article title
 * Acute stress disorder


 * Article Evaluation
 * This article is incomplete. Distinguish between shock and this disorder. Say that it leads to PTSD, but also detail how that happens, and what the differences are between this disorder and PTSD. Double check types of ASD??? The causes section needs to be vastly expanded, it barely touches on this topic within the article. The structure of the article needs a lot of revision as well, including moving the diagnostic criteria to the diagnosis section. Some of the sources are outdated, and some are peer reviewed, single experiment sources (no good). Review history section?


 * Sources
 * review DSM citations

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Option 5

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