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=Article Evaluation= Spider-Man = Reference= =Contributions to Russia page= Information that I would like to contribute would be on the landscape of the environment such as adding more information to the East European Plains as when compared to other topics within this section such as the ice caps it does not have much information about the plains such as the distance of the plains from coast to coast and the importance of the plains which helped Russia against invaders early on. Like I mentioned It does need more information on many sections such as the natural hazards as there is barely any information in the section with just a sentence and many of the landscape sections such as the Ural mountains don't have much information that can be critical and that would be one of the sections I would like to add information to it such as if Russia were to be divided, the Ural mountains would be consider the division line because of the differences between European Russia and EuroAsia.
 * In the first paragraph when describing his powers it would seem more appropriate if the author put first the powers of hero, in that he gains superhuman strength, endurance, and spider-sense before the mentioning of the web shooters would give the reader a more understanding of what kind of power Spider-Man has.
 * When looking at the section with Spider-Man's personality and the themes, I would add more explanation to these sections with the quotes as while it does explain why the author use the quotes, it does not go much into detail with the quotes but rather just what caused the quotes to be brought up into the article.
 * While this seems minor, I would add more detail to the supporting cast such as his relatives aunt May and uncle Ben as those two are characters that help evolve Spider-Man and would show the importance in the story of the character.
 * Under the section of "Other versions" it would be a good idea if the author was able to give us the readers a more clear image of the other incarnations of Spider-Man and while we do get a glimpse such as Miles Morales Spider-Man, Spider-Pork, and Spider-Man 2099, which while notable don't include some of the more popular incarnations such as the Scarlet-Spider and Spider-Carnage.
 * Everything seems to be in very well organize matter and if the article had to be left alone without a change I wouldn't mind this being the most accurate form that there can be but some small changes that I mention can help make things more clearer and show importance in some aspects and give us more details about the character.
 * The Ural Mountains can be considered the divisionary border between Europe and Asia to which if Russia were to be divided into two sections it would be through this mountain range.
 * The Central Siberian Plateau is mostly predominated my permafrost with the exception being along the pacific coast as the heat that the water gets from many active volcanoes provide helps keep permafrost from forming.