User:Jimyzhu/Binomial distribution/C.Hua Wang Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

C.Hua Wang


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Binomial distribution


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Binomial distribution

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Frankly speaking, this article is quite complete and there is not much room for editing. But I still try to give you some suggestions for editing.

Content
1.   (Definition) Example

I think more examples related to A can be added. At present, it is mainly explained in mathematics and statistics, and there are relatively few application examples.

2.  Properties

I think the process of proving Var(X)=np(1-p) can be supplemented.

3.  History

If this is a complete and widely applied statistical knowledge, it should have a long history of development. Therefore, I would suggest adding more information to its history.