User:Jimyzhu/Binomial distribution/Jiang1725 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jimyzhu


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Binomial distribution


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * 1) Lead section: Because binomial distribution is pretty famous, maybe trying to make lead section more clear is better.
 * 2) Article: The tone should me more neutral and if more examples are provided would be better.
 * 3) Reference: More high level articles and more recent articles should be cited to illustrate the topic clearly.