User:Jinie Ham/Coffee in South Korea/Kaia UW Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Jinie Ham)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jinie%20Ham/Coffee_in_South_Korea?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Coffee in South Korea

Evaluate the drafted changes
The Lead includes an introductory sentence that describes what the article is about and gives included a brief summary for each section. The Lead includes everything that is present within the article, and even its history. Every section is concise except for the Starbucks section which can be shortened. The Lead added information that is relevant to the topic and the content is up to date with no missing information. This article does not deal with Wikipedia's equity gap and any historically unrepresented populations or topics.

The content added is neutral and there is no bias. There viewpoints are neither overrepresented or underrepresented and the content doesn't persuade the reader to be in favor of one position or away from another. The citations were not added, so evaluation can't be done. The content is well written except for mixing some pronunciation for Korean words and had a few grammatical/spelling errors. The content is very organized by section which makes the information very digestible. There are no pictures but you should consider adding them.

Overall the article was fascinating. It was interesting to learn about the coffee places and different coffee chains in Korea. The strengths of the added content was very insightful.