User:Jitman43/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Anheuser Busch

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I have chosen Anheuser Busch because because i have seen in the news many times the precautions that they have take and what they have been doing to help the climate change problem.

Evaluate the article
Lead Section

Anheuser Bush is an American brewing company that was established in 2008. The head quarters are located in St Louis Missouri. Since its opening in 2008 it that grown to the worlds largest brewing company in the world. It contains 4 subdivisions within Anheuser Busch Budweiser, Michelob, Stella Artois, and Besks. The company itself has over 19000 employee and is all over the United States with 12 operating breweries. Before the begining of Anheuser Busch it was known as E. Anheaser Company which was originally founded in 1879. In 2008 inbev purchased the brewing company and changed the name of it to what we know it as today as Anheuser Busch. The Introductory of the article shows where the company has been and what iot has been through to get to where it is today. It gives all the information necessary to under what the company does and what its goals are for the furture and how the tradition of the company is going to continue on.

Content

The article provides all the information necessary for the basic understanding of the company. In the beginning of the article it gives an in depth evaluation of where the company has been and where it is going. It shows the history of the expansion of the company into the different parts of the world. Starting the united stats and now expanding into other parts of the world.

Tone and Balance

Overall id say the article is relatively neutral. In the beginning of the article its all history based and there aren't any opinions of anyone coming into play. towards the end of the article is shows everyone who has had ownership of the company. Along with that they talked about not only the brewing and ownership of the company but also talked about the other assets that the company processes. Than it also talked about the products themselves.

Sources and References

Yes, all the information that i have gathered from other sources seems to like up pretty well. They all have the same history lines and back up the same previous ownerships. Many of the sources i have looked at were all recorded and written by many different people. Not of the secondary sources that u looked at were written by the same people. Many of the article were written by multiple people incorporating different ideas and points of views.

Organization and Writing Quality

Overall i thought the article was written in a very concise manner and it was very easy to find all the information. The article has many very good points and is easy to understand what the author is saying. There aren't any grammer errors or spelling errors. All the major points are grouped up into sections and are very easy to find and to understand. It breaks down in order of the events that have happened and everything is in order.

Images and Media

I think the article worked in the perfect about of pictures and tables. There arent to many but the ones that we incorporated were put in at a great time. All the images are within the Wikipedia regulations and help with the understanding of the article. Along with that the captions of the images are very concise and easy to understand. With the tables it breaks down the information very well and make it easy to see the information that is provided.

Talk Page Discussion

Majority of the article talks about the history of the company and where its been. Some of the main conversations that were brought up were about the assets that they have as well. They have other assets besides the brewing. They own other properties all over the world. Along with the economic portion of the company they have there environmental preparation portion of the company. They do many things to take care of the environment and to help protect it.

Overall Impressions

Overall the article seems as if it is put together very well. I has all the necessary information and puts everything is a very organized manner. All of the information that is provided is all accurate and covers all aspects of the company. It goes from the history, to the owners, the how the protect the environment etc. The best thing about this article is how organized it is and how it is put together. When you have an article that isn't put together good and is all over the place it makes it very hard to follow and understand.