User:Jiyenita/Evaluate an Article

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 * Deddy Corbuzier
 * Deddy Corbuzier is a really famous entertainer in my home country, Indonesia. When I was younger, my father used to show me his magic tricks and magic shows. I have always known him as an amazing magician. In the past years, he has decided to dive into the world of presenters, shedding more light into his skill of talking, and managed to gain more recognition in Indonesia's entertaining industry. Deddy Corbuzier now hosts his very own podcast, which is available on Youtube.

Lead

 * Lead evaluation

The Lead includes an introductory sentence which summarizes the article's topic, though several information can be added to complete the profile. The Lead includes descriptions of some information that is not present or further elaborated in the sections. The Lead is concise.

Content

 * Content evaluation

The content of the article is relevant to the topic. The most recent change made is an updated news, but some new information are left out. There are some information that are mentioned in the Lead that are not further continued in the content.

Tone and Balance

 * Tone and balance evaluation

The article is neutral, with no claims that appear biased toward a particular position.

Sources and References

 * Sources and references evaluation

The facts in the article are backed up by reliable secondary source of information. The sources are thorough and current. The sources are written by a diverse spectrum of authors. Three out of the four links do not work.

Organization

 * Organization evaluation

The article is concise and easy to read, though there are many information that could be included to complete the article. The article only includes minor grammatical error. There is only one section in the article.

Images and Media

 * Images and media evaluation

The article includes only one image of the topic. The image is well-captioned and adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations.

Checking the talk page

 * Talk page evaluation

There are not any past conversations going on in the Talk Page. It seems like only one person did the Wiki page. The article is of interest to WikiProject Biography (rated Stub-Class), and WikiProject Indonesia (rated Stub-Class and Low-Importance).

Overall impressions

 * Overall evaluation

Overall, this is a Stub article which can use some improvements. The article does a great job captioning the image, and also giving a general background of the topic. The article can be improved by adding more information regarding the topic's early life, career, and achievements. The article is poorly developed.

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