User:Jjcham/Alpha Tau Delta/Coconut02 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jjcham


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User:Jjcham/Alpha_Tau_Delta&veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template&redirect=no


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Alpha Tau Delta

Evaluate the drafted changes
Content: The content added is relevant to the topic and even explains the topic better. All of the content added seems to be up-to-date.

Tone and Balance: All of the content is neutral and there doesn't seem to be any information/feelings that is biased towards a particular side.

Sources and References: All of the added content is backed up by a reliable secondary source of information. The content accurately reflects what the cited source says and the link works.

Organization: The content added is well written and easy to read. I didn't catch any grammatical or spelling errors in the added content. The content added is well organized and the headings are very clear.

Overall Impressions: The content added has definitely improved the overall quality of the article and better informed me of what the article was about. This article has a long way to go but this added content has made it more complete than where it was before. The only critique I have is that all of the added content is linked back to the same one source.